I find the most peaceful time of the day
to be right around midnight.
Silence is at it's loudest,
and it's during this time
when one can review life without great sorrow.
It helps not to be wading through the stillness
alone.
He snuggles closer to me
as we spoon in th middle of the bed.
He's moments from sleep,
but me?
Wide awake I scan the floor
littered are our clothes,
further validating the passionate scene that occurred
shortly before this
moment.
I turn into him nestling my head into his chest,
playing each delightful scene through my mind's eyes
over and over
until finally sleep finds me.
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02/12/2008
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Posted by: Amanda | 02/13/2008 at 10:41 AM
sounds like a pleasant evening. Like how you tipped sorrow right out of the picture.
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